What would I write about?

What would I write about?

It’s raining outside,and

I’m dreaming inside.

The wind is so cold,yet

I’m sweating untold.

Thunderclap roaring loud,yet

my mind silence vowed.

What would I write about?

I throw a glance at the sky,

At the streets, at the trees.

Not a word, nor a thought

Not a sigh, nor a wink

What would I write about?

And yet! There you are,

awaiting me,inspiring me

so on, so forth

and thus,was born

A piece of paper,

so full of words,

so full of life,

Of ink, Of tears

Of blood, Of sweat.

Who else would I write about?

but you! dear somebody!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the rainy days. Give me time to write and read. I like the desire and the description in the poem. I like the personal feel in the words. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Leslie Philibert]

a clever poem that impresses....

[RG]

Greatly executed! I Like the rhythm and flow.

[realmwriter]

Now that is inspiration worth taking note of. You started with a blank sheet of paper and a blank mind and wrote a wonderfully delightful piece that resonate the images of trees and of joyous times. Thank you for posting this piece here...!

[Salar Majak]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is so very sweat!!!!!!!!!!! REALLY REALLY REALLY SWEAT!!!! the poem is a divine in structure!

[WingsToFly]

Beautiful write.

[Arun.J]

thanks :)

[SmileBig :)]

Wonderful :)

[Arun.J]

thanks :)

[SmileBig :)]

No problem :)

[Claire Twinn]

Something all us writers often stress about. Sometimes you just have to do it, even if the idea hasn't truely formed yet. You have described the horror of writer's block wonderfully!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A rather whimsical, day dream feel to this. A sense of someone empty, lost and without love drifting in a space. It flows well and reads well.