first there was jewel

this story is only beginning with an introduction of 2 beings

In a land far away there was a plant that was all alone and from it dropped a water drop onto the ground and on the ground formed 2 arms and 2 legs, and a long braid of hair came out and ended with a kunai, it was a female, she was all white with black tattoos of beast of all kind on her arms and legs, and silver eyes like the color been drain from them.

She looked around  the room till she landed her eyes on the giant flower. The flower said “ hi jewel”. The girl stepped back then said “ is my name jewel”. The flower replied “ yes and i am the crystal flower”. The girl said “ how do you know who i am” the crystal flower responded “i created you for great purposes. You can do great things too and best of all you can learn more about yourself when you start your journey”.

“what is a journey”said jewel. “ A journey is whatever comes in your path and sometimes it’s good or bad.” said crystal flower. “So when do i start my journey.”asked jewel. “After you train for it.”answered crystal flower. “ What does it means to train” asked jewel. “ It’s when you practice for something like how we are about to train you for the world you’ll live in once we’re done” crystal flower responded.

“Now lets start the training” all of a sudden the room changed there was a bunch of targets lineup and her clothes were different too she had on silver tights, she had on a belt with two blades forming, there were also kunai and shurikens on her belt. She asked “where am i, why am i wearing this, where are you crystal flower”. “ Don’t worry child i am watching you in your belt around your waist there are two long blades called swords, they will help you with your training”. “What training is this” said jewel.

Author's Note

please ignore grammar errors.

Reviews

[matrixmark]

Ok, so like you say in your author note, I will ignore grammar.
This story is quite unlike anything I have read. It goes from a something which is fairly straightforward to something which actually sounds pretty damn cool. Its a shame this short peice had to end where it did as I was hoping for more. But nonetheless it was a good read.

Mark.

[arucard]

i will be adding more chapters i only finished 4 altogether and will be putting them up every day then once i have enough reviews i will make my decision whether i want to redo the story better.