Peace, Love and Adamite

You may have seen this poem posted before. It has been edited a bit. Please feel free to let me know what you think.

Drowning in misery,

Stumbling along,

A Namib desert,

Forsaken and dry.

Reeling mind,

Replaying the day,

Slander spreading,

Ducts breeding tears.

Walking and wandering,

Nowhere to go,

Sauntering aimlessly,

Lost in poor perception.

Tripping suddenly on rock piled high,

Randomly placed for my own humiliation.

Rubble in hand,

Brimming with rage,

Ready to launch

Crost’ this desolate place.

Sound reaching ears,

A crumple of paper.

Beneath assumed rock,

A letter is bound.

Name atop this parchment I find...

Interest brimming... separating pair.

Eyes open wide, skimming the page.

Curiosity engaged, I thoroughly read.

Sweet Dalon, you’re here.

You’ve found us at last.

The wind whispered to us

That you’d arrive someday.

We patiently waited for our paths to cross.

We felt your agony grow closer each day.

We hope we can offer

A symbol of hope.

We represent joy,

Spirit and guidance.

We appear to be rock,

Nothing more than debris,

But in fact, we’re a stone,

A gem to be precise.

They call us Adamite,

A symbol of alignment.

We can stimulate your mind

And physical well being.

We’ll awaken your heart

To the beauty of life,

And align the chakras

Of the solar plexus.

We come to help, my friend,

So take us in your hand.

Place one in your pocket,

And another in your bag.

Keep us with you through trouble,

And remember us through triumph.

If you choose to keep us,

Your existence will grow.

So give us a chance.

Simply reach out...And take us.

Peace, Love and Adamite.

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Adamite meaning

Adamite is a stone of joy, creativity, enthusiasm. It aligns the heart and solar plexus chakras, stimulating both mental and physical well being.

Adamite evolves the spirit

Some uses of Adamite are:

• Open the heart to communication with angels, spirit guides and those who have passed on

• Awaken the joy of the inner child

• Shield from psychic attacks, or other negativity

• Stimulate creativity

• Expression of playful spirit

Sources of Adamite

Adamite is mostly found in Mexico and Namibia.

Author's Note

Please feel free to be as constructively honest as you wish. Any suggestions or corrections are much appreciated. Do not rate or review based on opinion or subject of this piece. If you would like the favor returned please send me a read request or a message with the piece you wish for me to review! Happy writing :D

Reviews

[Johnson Bobby]

beutiful job very moving i feel conection to you story
trouble moving pass the present sometimes but comes
and goes and a new tomorrow comes and the sun shines again
new love comes and blooms

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and educational poetry. My favorite kind.
"Peace, Love and Adamite."
The lines above. Leave the reader with thoughts and possibility. Thank you for sharing
the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[ManasaC]

The process of struggle and healing beautifully written. Interesting and amazing!!!

[Troy Henson]

I do love a good educational write.

Thank you

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[Willard Wells]

Interesting read. Poetry with a little education thrown it. Nice flow and fun Thanks

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[anne]

We appear to be rock,
Nothing more than debris,
But in fact, we’re a stone,
A gem to be precise. ....
you have a beautiful writing style, liked it...

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[Sindu]

As a chemist at heart, when you give me information like that I learn about it. That's what I did first and enjoyed knowing bout something new! Creative and interesting manner how you put together all the info together in a tale like poem..

I think if you walk in desert, lost of direction and senses, rocks that colourful can sure talk or maybe even dance :D
But to me it's chemicals, composition and analysis. I cannot understand this connection :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you for reading :D

[Pushkar Prabhat]

quite informative.....
never came across a talking rock before.... :P
beautiful and masterful write....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Briana O'Connor]

Lol everything talks if u just listen...or are crazy 😜

[Pushkar Prabhat]

oh i got enough of the latter...........it is just that i usually talk to rocks......they are great listeners!!! :P :P

[Briana O'Connor]

lol exactly!

[dw817]

Reading more of your work now, you remind me more and more of an unusual series I saw a few years ago which I finally went out to purchase the DVDs for. It is called, "Broken Saints." and has 57-episodes to it.

I have posted the initial video HERE,
http://bit.ly/1cd5t0p

If I didn't know better, I would think that you had a hand in the words for this video art with your metaphorical and mystical musings. Most interesting. :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you very much for that compliment. That was def an interesting watch!

[dw817]

And how very much it seems to reflect you. :7 Take care ...

[~]

I liked the creativity within this poem, and I learned a few new things. powerful!! love the idea of rocks and layering the poem like the rock formations. :D

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you very much :D