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A simple, brief and well-written poem with the perfect words and description. I like how you follow each four lined stanza with a longer line. That's a nice little message you've conveyed in the last lines; many can relate to the emotion and the state you've so beautifully described. Also, you've really been missed around here.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
thank you so much :D It's nice to know I've been missed.
Hmmm. Wow Briana, this one was poignant. While reading this, your short concise lines reminded me of what poetry is all about...an assemblage of words to pack a punch conveying meaning and eliciting emotions. I thought your second stanza stood out. Quite a strong write this with a positive message behind it. Thanks for sharing.
tough words Briana and really good to see you after so long, the longing for love knows no limits when it comes to how far we will go to find it, a really great poem see's you right smack bang here on the Cafe, lovely work my friend :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
thank you. ya when i get in a phase I neglect a lot of things. decided to make an appearance and do .. read morethank you. ya when i get in a phase I neglect a lot of things. decided to make an appearance and do some reading today and as I was reading this popped in my head. thank you for reading :D
Strong and powerful words leading to a very good ending.
"Lacking perspective
She fails to comprehend
This feeling so longed for
Is right within reach
If only she’d grasp it, and hand it to herself"
I tell people. You can't find love. Love will find you. Last line is true wisdom. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Trying to come back to writing! Curious to see who all is still here and what new adventures their are to join!
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