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Brittney: I loved it...it's about every girl I've ever known, little snapshots here and there. I've been there before...everybody wants to be beautiful...somebody tell us we are. We cling to the wrong things, but that's life and we learn. No? You, my dear, are a talented writer. So many emotions and compelling imagery it radiates:
She’s giving, losing self respect
Affection, she’s seeking
Attention of wrong sort
A lesson unlearned
This pursuit of devotion
Like I said: You ROAR!!! Thank you so much....Dale
She seeks self esteem from other imperfect souls
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much :D I really appreciate the positive review. I am often down on myself and this hel.. read moreThank you so much :D I really appreciate the positive review. I am often down on myself and this helps lift me up :D
9 Years Ago
You're welcome, and writing is good for our spirit. Thanks too!
Do you think most women go into it with the thought of changing the bad out of the boy? And if they.. read moreDo you think most women go into it with the thought of changing the bad out of the boy? And if they actually could do THAT do you think they would really still want the guy anymore now that he isn't what attracted them?
9 Years Ago
I have no idea lol. For some reason women are naturally fixers, but I have learned that it is not my.. read moreI have no idea lol. For some reason women are naturally fixers, but I have learned that it is not my job to fix anyone. I am naturally attracted to the rebels, but if i can't accept them for who they are I've learned to walk away.
Trying to come back to writing! Curious to see who all is still here and what new adventures their are to join!
Creativity is my outlet, and I love learning and growing. Do not hesitate to be honest .. more..