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that's a simply marvelous poem Brianna, your writing always amazes me and this is remarkable because of the simplicity of the subject made fantastic by your wording and design, beautiful :)
Wow! I read it many time; and each time the view I have in mind is different. Thank you for this wonderful piece :) Sorry, I haven't found any criticism to provide you with. It was crystal clear :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much. No need to apologize! I like it when there's not criticism to provide :P
hi... I really like this piece... I do have a suggestion although you know how you want it to read.. As I read it out loud... the first line: In the wind they fly without a destination,.... the word (a) makes it pause or bumpy and if you omit it... it flows really nice.. like :In the wind they fly without destination,... but its just a suggestion... I applaud your ability...
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much. I like that suggestion. I shall change it!
10 Years Ago
you are welcome dear... hope to read more of your writing
i LOVE IT. Thought it was beautiful. Just what I needed. Went outside a moment ago, to find leaves, for a wreath. But the beautiful colors are up high.
Their texture spreads music beneath wandering feet,
Crunching with a pulse to the drumming of a snare.
The descriptions are delightful. I jumped this dawn, walked on the front porch for coffee and leafs crushed beneath my feet; (a snake had been at the edge of our porch last yr) and awhile ago, they were falling like snow with the wind blowing. Thank you. I love nature.
Trying to come back to writing! Curious to see who all is still here and what new adventures their are to join!
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