Mannequin

Cinquain poem for contest

Mannequin

Lifeless Model

Showcasing time’s fad

Lonely, meaningless displayed canvas

Hollow

Author's Note

Please feel free to be as constructively honest as you wish. Any suggestions or corrections are much appreciated. Do not rate or review based on opinion or subject of this piece. If you would like the favor returned please send me a read request or a message with the piece you wish for me to review! Happy writing :D

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

wow! nice job with that! well chosen subject ... i like the form!
E.

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D

[hardeep sabharwal]

very well written, thanks for the author s note, they helped a lot to understand and enjoy the read

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

And like the clothing they were, they are here today and gone tomorrow. It is such sad industry, especially that they promote skinny as sexy. Personally I like a woman with healthy curves.

Anyways a very well done poem, you certainly made your pint with quick precision.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome :)

[Malister Mikey]

Very well done on this one, I like how you explained what you were doing in the Note, it helped me out to really enjoy this piece. Great Job

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[Sectando]

Very good cinquain! I've never attempted this type of poetry before and I actually had to read the author's note to see how it's supposed to be formatted. I think you did a wonderful job.

[Briana O'Connor]

Me either. I just stumbled across a contest about them an figured I'd give it a shot....don't know why I though of mannequins lol

[Pryde Foltz]

Great piece in brevity but I have to ask Brianna do you mean hollow or hallow?

[Briana O'Connor]

woops :D thank you for your eyeballs...mine are sleepy :P