Mannequin

Cinquain poem for contest

Mannequin

Lifeless Model

Showcasing time’s fad

Lonely, meaningless displayed canvas

Hollow

Author's Note

Please feel free to be as constructively honest as you wish. Any suggestions or corrections are much appreciated. Do not rate or review based on opinion or subject of this piece. If you would like the favor returned please send me a read request or a message with the piece you wish for me to review! Happy writing :D

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A highly intelligent and interesting piece, well done.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you very much

[realmwriter]

Interesting. I've not written in this style either. I must give it a try and might I say that, I think you have done a fantastic job here.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[realmwriter]

You are welcome.

[averywhiddock]

Pretty brilliant! I don't think I've ever seen a Cinquain poem before. Learned something new today.

[Briana O'Connor]

never heard of it either till I stumbled upon the contest. Thank you :D

[MomzillaNC]

Cool little form. I like the fourth line especially.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you very much

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[NoelHC]

It seems you have met the rules of format, and explained the piece well.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[Bill O. Writes]

Nice! I'll have to try this style out...no pun intended lol. It seems fun! Great job!

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[R Smith]

Excellent your really into these different styles of poems and very good at it.....smarty pants! hahahaha

[Briana O'Connor]

So I like a challenge! Is that a crime mister butthead???? lol

[R Smith]

not at all mrs butthead hahahaha

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine job, I like cinquains..

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D

[Mayank]

I liked the form, haven't studied that but its very playful with lot of meaning...

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you very much