Glitter In The Sky

Cascade Poem-Poetic Form

Tonight, the stars are dancing,...

Vibrant across the sky,...

All with glitter in their eyes.

They frolic along freely,

Skipping around the moon...

Tonight, the stars are dancing...

Some hand in hand,

Spinning round and round,...

Vibrant across the sky.

Lighting up the universe

As they play their part well,...

All with glitter in their eyes.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Tomorrowneverknows]

... wow the picture is extraordinary beautuiful. It is the deep space.There are two spiral galaxies like our Milky Way on the left. Can you see them?

...The poem is very beautiful as well and it is true night after night "The stars are dancing...Vibrant across the sky...All with glitter in their eyes..."

- Jesus

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you so much for you kind words.

[R Smith]

sounds like you got it right Briana, its a beautiful poem with glitter in its eyes :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Awww you are too kind :D

[R Smith]

really....I must be slipping....not serious!

[Briana O'Connor]

lol I was kinda scared

[Jackson H. Harley]

Awesome cascade, and a great concept for it too, stars are cool and interesting, one of my favourite parts of physics, nice work :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you. I really like trying out these new forms. Some of them are absolutely impossible though. This guy from writers digest has a hold blog page about 50 different types. Some of them I can't even begin to attempt! But the ones I can are fun :D and I like fun :D

[Jackson H. Harley]

You do very wellat the ones you attempt :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Aw :D Well thank you!

[Jackson H. Harley]

Welcome :)