Glitter In The Sky

Cascade Poem-Poetic Form

Tonight, the stars are dancing,...

Vibrant across the sky,...

All with glitter in their eyes.

They frolic along freely,

Skipping around the moon...

Tonight, the stars are dancing...

Some hand in hand,

Spinning round and round,...

Vibrant across the sky.

Lighting up the universe

As they play their part well,...

All with glitter in their eyes.

Author's Note

Please feel free to be as constructively honest as you wish. Any suggestions or corrections are much appreciated. Do not rate or review based on opinion or subject of this piece. If you would like the favor returned please send me a read request or a message with the piece you wish for me to review! Happy writing :D

Reviews

[hardeep sabharwal]

very nicely penned poem,, and you way of portraying was fabulous

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D

[hardeep sabharwal]

my pleasure :)

[Michael]

Very amazing. You've made me fall in love with stars even more, if possible lol

[Briana O'Connor]

awww thank you :D

[Lindsay Hope]

This is really great. You really painted a picture in my head, nice job :)

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[Baby Ricochet]

If glitter really did fall from the sky this would be some place

[Briana O'Connor]

Lol. The stars aren't falling silly! They're dancing!!!!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing piece, I loved reading it. Interesting concept, nicely penned. :-)

Kaze~

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you so much

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I love this piece! I agree with the enchanting descriptions comment, though I don't think enchanting is a strong enough word for how well you have penned the descriptions here. Amazing use of style and voice, I really like how you used that to format your flow instead of letting the flow/rhythm dominate the beautiful strength of your voice and point.

Gorgeously penned.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you so much for you very kind review :D

[Steve L.]

Beautiful poem! Enchanting descriptions!!

[ANM]

Eloquently done lovely descriptive poem, purely from my point of view I dont think the highlighted text adds anything..

[Briana O'Connor]

It's not really meant to lol. I was bored

[ANM]

Ah ok ... I'm just behind the times... Ha ha

[Briana O'Connor]

Lol I'm a colorful person and behind the times, but one thing I've always been able to figure out is writing technology like microsoft word and google docs. I like fiddeling around with random colors and what not. If you saw the paper I'm the editor of you'd laugh. It looks kinda like a coloring book :D

[ANM]

Well I am a complete philistine when it comes to tech stuff and computers... Just about handle my I Pad!! Which paper do you edit??

[Briana O'Connor]

It's a paper for a 12 step program I am a part of

[Malister Mikey]

great job on this one made me think of the stars I don't see them often were I live because its always so cloudy lol.

[Briana O'Connor]

Well that stinks. I just love the sky and all its wonders

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now that is a wonderful way to describe the night sky… I love the sky at night but could never describe it and brilliantly as you did.

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you. I was looking through different kinds of poetry forms and when I saw the cascade form this just popped in my head! thank you for your kind words.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome… I was just telling it like I see it.

[Briana O'Connor]

Your words were very kind :D