Fight For Revenge

Blitz Poem

Propose a challenge

Propose a fight

Fight for knowledge

Fight for love

Love thy needy

Love thy land

Land the accolade

Land the crown

Crown to the peacekeeper

Crown to the saints

Saints be gracious

Saints be kind

Kind to the populace

Kind to the beasts

Beasts of the mountains

Beasts of the grove

Grove in the highlands

Grove in the park

Park your spirit

Park your mind

Mind this matter

Mind this game

Game most rousing

Game most large

Large be the attention

Large be the need

Need to evolve

Need to break free

Free from the blasphemy

Free from the chains

Chains on your conscience

Chains on your soul

Soul of the darkness

Soul of the foul

Foul is your intentions

Foul is your motive

Motive for destruction

Motive for revenge

Revenge will be upon you

Revenge will be your fall

Fall into entrapment

Fall into despair

Despair your feeble battle

Despair your barren attempt

Attempt to rally the masses

Attempt to settle the score

Score the impuissant nation

Score the faint at heart

Heart...

Nation...

Author's Note

Please feel free to be as constructively honest as you wish. Any suggestions or corrections are much appreciated. Do not rate or review based on opinion or subject of this piece. If you would like the favor returned please send me a read request or a message with the piece you wish for me to review! Happy writing :D

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Very hard to read because of the colour, however once one gets past that this is a great attempt at blitz, it's inspired me to try it myself darling, well done.

[Avanthika]

wow , amazing . too good , loved this unique style , thanks a lot , glad i found this piece , looks like i cn try too

[Briana O'Connor]

It's a lot of fun! Some crazy stuff can come out of poems like these!!! be sure to send me a read request when you come up with one!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very nice work here, an enjoyable read :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very nice work here, an enjoyable read :)

[ANM]

Very well done first time I have read a link poem! Bravo...

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you so much

[ANM]

You are welcome!!

[Malister Mikey]

Great work as always I enjoyed these piece quite a bit, love the color scheme.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[Jackson H. Harley]

Love this poem, words can't even explain, awesome work :D

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D

[Jackson H. Harley]

Yore welcome, I forgot to mention the red writing black background is very cool :p

[Briana O'Connor]

When I get bored I get colorful :D lol I'm the editor of a paper and the whole thing is highlighted and different colors each month...it looks like a coloring book :D lol

[Jackson H. Harley]

Awesome :D

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

This is a very badass poem

[Briana O'Connor]

well thank you :D

[Rana]

Whoa, for a first attempt you've done pretty awesome at a new style of poetry.. Yeah, its sorta hard and challenging. I enjoyed this. And thanks for the introduction to this new form..

[Briana O'Connor]

This was crazy! but a lot of fun. It makes absolutely no sense though lol I might be come addicted to it though, because once I get on a kick I tend to stick to it for awhile. If you saw my profile before I deleted all my stuff I was on a gem kick and then a mythological creature kick. I'm kinda on a nature kick at the moment, but I'm trying to resist since people seem to not be into nature poems :P

[Rana]

This kind of addiction is actually great :P Yeah, I did notice how you picked up on something and then stuck to it for a while. I like that. Its so methodical, like you enjoy one thing to your heart's full then merrily move on :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Lol I do love exploring merrily :D