Fight For Revenge

Blitz Poem

Propose a challenge

Propose a fight

Fight for knowledge

Fight for love

Love thy needy

Love thy land

Land the accolade

Land the crown

Crown to the peacekeeper

Crown to the saints

Saints be gracious

Saints be kind

Kind to the populace

Kind to the beasts

Beasts of the mountains

Beasts of the grove

Grove in the highlands

Grove in the park

Park your spirit

Park your mind

Mind this matter

Mind this game

Game most rousing

Game most large

Large be the attention

Large be the need

Need to evolve

Need to break free

Free from the blasphemy

Free from the chains

Chains on your conscience

Chains on your soul

Soul of the darkness

Soul of the foul

Foul is your intentions

Foul is your motive

Motive for destruction

Motive for revenge

Revenge will be upon you

Revenge will be your fall

Fall into entrapment

Fall into despair

Despair your feeble battle

Despair your barren attempt

Attempt to rally the masses

Attempt to settle the score

Score the impuissant nation

Score the faint at heart

Heart...

Nation...

Author's Note

Please feel free to be as constructively honest as you wish. Any suggestions or corrections are much appreciated. Do not rate or review based on opinion or subject of this piece. If you would like the favor returned please send me a read request or a message with the piece you wish for me to review! Happy writing :D

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Interesting. A format I've not come across. Very intricate and I would guess demanding. I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you for your perseverance in writing it.

[Amanda Worthington]

I can just imagine trying to write one of these.... it does seem really hard. But you did a really good job! Very well written! :)

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you. you should give it a whirl. even if it doesn't completely fit together at the end, it's still a lot of fun. you never know where it's going to go. it's kind of thrill actually...i know I'm weird. lol thank you for reading :D

[Dark Poet]

This is one of the best poems i have ever heard. Stunning.

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you very much :D

[Dayran]

Quite a rally ... that goes straight to the heart of lethargy ... to create a response. Nice ...

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[Tricia Pattinson]

Interesting and stimulating to read. I think this is the first blitz poem I've read.

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D They're a lot of fun. Random...but fun :D

[Mayank]

well done Briana, left me breathless. You should know there are few heavy smokers on this website... :)

[Briana O'Connor]

lol thank you

[spitballing]

Haven't seen a blitz poem before. Cool! Nicely done.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D If you ever run out of ideas there's whole blogs full of stuff to write about and different styles of writing and poetry to try! That's my fun time :D

[TL Boehm]

Well done. Its like a chant - a war cry. Always good to stretch the writing muscles with "flippin hard" styles. I wrote a sestina once....ONCE.

[Briana O'Connor]

lol i haven't gotten to the s poems yet but i'll have to check that out. i like spreadin my wings :D

[realmwriter]

I am happy to have read this piece and stumbled upon it so that I might glimpse what this style that I have not seen is. Very interesting and as soon as the link that has been provided loads I will read about it further and probably try my own. I love the message in this one. Very well said my friend.

[Briana O'Connor]

be sure to send me a read request!

[realmwriter]

When I write one, I certainly will send you an RR