Confections Of My Demise

A silly poem about a nigh mare I had once

Cylinder chocolate swelling in my throat,

Lusciously sweet confections will be my demise.

Gasping and gagging, tears raining down,

Thrashing and pleading for unpolluted air.

Eyes open wide from pressure upon my chest

Kingsley licks my face, butting me with his head

Breathing so effortless, it all becomes clear

The tootsie roll monster has visited me again

Note to myself:

No snacks before bed!

Author's Note

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Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Ha ha ha yes good one. I loved it. I do like poetry that makes people smile.

[Mazie]

This poem is cute and funny! I can personally relate as a chocoholic XD Nicely written!

[Briana O'Connor]

lol thank you :D

[Beccy]

Great fun. Best way to beat that before bed craving - just eat the chocolate then go to bed much later.

Beccy.

[Briana O'Connor]

lol thank you :D

[hardeep sabharwal]

enjoyable and silly read, and I like chocolates :)

[Dayran]

Its funny! I had quite a laugh reading it. You're gonna watch what you eat before bed aren't you? Nice ...

[Briana O'Connor]

yes I learned my lesson :P

[SmittyJas]

Nice ad for Tootsie Rolls and other sweets Can't eat them I'm dietetic Great Poem Sweet Girl

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[Harmony-Lee]

Silly yes, sounds like I'm missing out over here in Aus, never had the pleasure of a Tootie Roll, but chocolate is my downfall :-)
Well done.

[Briana O'Connor]

lol thank you for reading

[Mayank]

I love chocolates, especially after getting high... and snacks too.

[Briana O'Connor]

lmao who doesn't

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting dress. At one time. They would pay you to have ads on cars. This is a good add for Tootie roll. I enjoyed the poem. Photo made the poem have life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Briana O'Connor]

lol thank you very much :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[TL Boehm]

This is cute, and funny. Never been attacked in my dreams by candy - but I've had issues with nachos before... They're out to get me the crispy little things.

[Briana O'Connor]

lmao now that's funny!