My Hollow Soul

To Whom It May Concern,

My heart, it’s exhausted, broken in too many pieces to count.

My mind, it’s frazzled, strained beyond its own comprehension.

My body, it’s dragging, patronizing its own existence.

My smile, it’s hiding, too ashamed to shed it’s light.

My eyes, they grow heavy, too weak to carry on.

This being has forsaken me.

I’m imprisoned in a hollow soul.

I’m dying...slowly,

Abandoning all power of will.

Sincerly,

Please Help Me...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A good one. Thank you for sharing...:)...................

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you for taking the time tor read

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....:).......

[Arrinae]

I'd just call it 'Help Me'. Its good, the emotions behind it are strong and relatable. Well done!

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you for your suggestion