Thea

This is a poem I wrote about the little girl I lost when I was a teenager.

On every thirtieth of May,

I send a prayer to God.

I ask him to give Thea,

A birthday hug from mom.

I try to picture her face today,

Smiling down on me...

With innocent eyes

Of a seven year old,

Protecting her mommy,

Until the day we can meet.

Author's Note

Please feel free to be as constructively honest as you wish. Any suggestions or corrections are much appreciated. Do not rate or review based on opinion or subject of this piece. If you would like the favor returned please send me a read request or a message with the piece you wish for me to review! Happy writing :D

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It is a sad and beautiful poem. You expressed hope to see your baby again. This is a good wish. Thank you for sharing the powerful poem for love and angels.
Coyote

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you very much for your kind words

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[stars are far]

ouch thats very saaaaad..... i loved it ..well done

[Briana O'Connor]

thanky you very much

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine write, the sadness implied and subtle..well written !

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you very much for your kind words

[Malister Mikey]

such a beautiful poem you made a vivid picture and I love the part With innocent eyes
Of a seven year old, good write

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you very much for your kind words

[Rocans]

This is short but very profound. It does not explicitly state the essence of the sadness but it is implied, and that I think makes it even more profound. I enjoyed this. Write on

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you very much for your kind words

[R Smith]

That's so sad Briana, I am sure one day you will meet until then may she look upon you with love always :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you very much