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I agree. Good to release words to paper.
"Not one understands.
I’m lost in a world
where I just can’t find the words."
Sometime silence is better. When our words are meaningless to the listener. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Sometimes, it`s easy being around words so, sometimes.. as hard as uncertainty of life, but yeah.. the poetry helps everyone either getting relaxed with calm winds or getting lost in past.. with or "without" words. So, I think, lacking of words chew the soul deeply as long as a writer ain`t chew the words with 'poetry'. Very beautiful write you`ve come up with. Liked it!
That is exactly how I feel a lot of the time. Like my mind isn't always quick enough to keep up with the world. I will often think of the perfect thing to say to something five minutes after the subject is dismissed. But you are totally right, that is what poetry is for. Brilliant write!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I know right? My brilliance always comes to late or too early in the conversation :P Oh well...their.. read moreI know right? My brilliance always comes to late or too early in the conversation :P Oh well...their loss ;D Thank you for reading.
funny how those of us who spend so much time using words, because we write, struggle with finding those same words we wield. The frustration of that is clear in this one
Can relate to what you have said in the poem..words are like bombs at times..maybe communion in silence is what we all are waiting for, when you just give someone a glimpse and you become transparent..nothing said or done..just a look to suffice and the message conveyed :)
-Sunya
Trying to come back to writing! Curious to see who all is still here and what new adventures their are to join!
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