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Powerful and good words.
"To just sit back and be.
One day at a time,
I'm not afraid of the climb.
“Let go and let God”..."
I agree. One day at a time to find proper place and we need faith and good friend to make the journey happen. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
This was cool. At first I thought it might be an abusive relationship, but it turned out to be a different kind of abusive relationship than what I expected. I like how you personified alcohol, and it is admirable that you were able to break free from such a prison. Both of my parents are in AA, and it really saved their lives.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
It's truly a blessing in my life! Thank you for your kind words.
Must have been a tough one to write but its a part of your recovery and puts into words the struggle you must have went through, so glad to see you one with God now, sets you free :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I am too. my life took a change for the better when I got sober.2 and a half years later i've never .. read moreI am too. my life took a change for the better when I got sober.2 and a half years later i've never felt better. thank you for taking the time to read.
I am still recovering and somehow I can connect it too myself...
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
when it comes to addiction i will always be recovering, but i can recover sober, happy, joyous and f.. read morewhen it comes to addiction i will always be recovering, but i can recover sober, happy, joyous and free today. I hope that if you are active in any addiction that you can find help. it's a hard journey, but totally worth it. thank you for taking the time to read.
Trying to come back to writing! Curious to see who all is still here and what new adventures their are to join!
Creativity is my outlet, and I love learning and growing. Do not hesitate to be honest .. more..