memory

memory

A Poem by Artur

 

four months are so little

to forget how to

worship you

© 2008 Artur


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I can relate to the suffering of this writing about getting over somebody.

However, there is a tiny grammar mistake mate,

"it is" should be replaced by "are",

four months are so little
to forget how to
worship you

After all, it is a nice little piece, short but hits home.

Hope this helps! ;-)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 10, 2008
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Artur
Artur

Torquay, United Kingdom



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