Sober

This is for all people who overcame their addiction in one way or another. Also I hope this will help others to free themselves of some bad habits and addictions. Thank you all for the support.

Sober in a moment, living in a dream

Being sober is enjoyment, like a fresh cream

Living in illusion, all the time you spent

What is the conclusion, what is that you ment

Realize the problem, free yourself of the addiction

Feel again the love, and forget all the contradictions

Sober once again, sober but so nervous

If you sober you will gain, finally you touch us.

Now you care so much, questioning your every action.

You don't want again to crush, in another life attraction

Time will pass, and you're clear

this will last, if your darkest side dissapear

Finally you're happy, feeling like a god

Your pas was very sloppy, but now you found your spot.

Reviews

[Fabric Pulse]

Very encouraging!

[Marina]

It's a bumpy road, heh! 't is true though.. at the end, no matter what we go through, we'll be where we belong if we try hard enough.

[Alicia Schroeder]

You put those words together perfectly. I really admire this one. Beautifull skills.

[EmpressPoetess]

Way to go! keep at it and you'll come out a winner, just remember to pray daily!

[Mauricio Montoya]

one day at a time, thats what works for me.
great job.

[Tate Morgan]

A good way to be I can relate I have had bad times as well and addiction is a bummer

[nono]

Very interesting. I like how you wrote this it really is something amazing. Keep it up. I love the vivid detail you put into describe it. Nice job. I can't wait to read more of your writing.