Summer is gone

Hey ya all just wrote this one in a restaurant :) near the seaside :0 Hope you like it :) I don't think is really good but it just came out :) enjoy

The summer is gone this year is past

until the seasons change life will last

 

No more late nights drinking on the beach

no more sweet and tender kisses to reach

 

Now only brown and white we will have

with autum and winter leaves the dove

 

Such nice memmories and adventures

all gone for the forthcoming tentures

 

It is hard to understand

if next year summer will stand

 

The nice sea and ocean

going into never ending motion

 

Makes you calm and ready for the worse

nothing can interfiere even with a curse

 

Nice summer nice time

you should enjoy summer not only in your prime

 

Reviews

[sharon]

wow this describes every feeling that comes to mind when summer ends it suck but your poem puts it into a different perspective that attracts me to it so nicely =) truely an art...

[Sarah]

i think we all wish that too

[Cheyenne]

*sigh* I wish summer could never end...:)

Very nice poem. :)