All I Want

All I Want is you by my side

All I want is happening tonight

All I want is gone in fears

all i want is only pure tears

All i want is being on my own

all i want is going down

All I want is in a grasp

all i want will fade in gasp

All I want always disappear 

all i want is out of this sphere

All i want is being free 

all I want is close to me 

All I want is constant joy

all I want is being mama's boy

Reviews

[JENY]

a very sublime list of wishes….
a wish for liberation…and freedom appears as a common thread…
beautiful….
Just beautiful…

[sharon]

smooth words very catchy they just roll off the tongue like water down a creek...

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

beautiful words, and I like how you use the two meanings of the phrase 'all I want' in the succesive lines. It creates a nice effect.

[Flo]

didn't expect the ending, awesome write, keep writing, I like your work!
-Flo

[Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin]

lol, i also have a poem called all i want, but it's more song like. I like what you did with the theme of wanting to be with someone, and that being the only thing the narrator wants to do. Good job and Good writings!
-Yin