Blessed by God

Another new piece and different than my usual write. I really fell in love with this one :P

Blessed by god I stand 

blessed to rot in sand

Fortune follows my footsteps

lucky always with new debts 

Wealth is everywhere I go

death  is close to me you know

Beauty living deep inside

ugly girl just committed suicide 

Love is always at the corner

you've been searching but you did not store her

Faith helps you past this moment

faith is to be your torment

Time is endless 

life is past

only blessed ones 

will  last.

Reviews

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Wow this Scream the Blessings of life and The Gloom and Dead parts of life ups and downs and the Reality of life and the Greed of the Goverment and the World and ones that care and ones that don't corruptness and hate and love of the world
i love this Piece i fell in love with this i Love the last lines but it is all very Creative. BRAVO! god bless lily



Faith helps you past this moment
faith is to be your torment


Time is endless
life is past
only blessed ones
will last.

[An owl on the moon]

Such stunning contrasts.. You paint in sunshine and shadow, down line by line.. Gripping, honest, and poignant write of faith and faithlessness..

[JENY]

Wow…
Realities and paradoxes of life…
You depicted…them…in a handful of lines…
An excellent work…
There is a good philosopher in you…

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Beautiful contrast this poems partrays, and the lines
Time is endless
life is past
only blessed ones
will last.
wer awesome!!!

[Mauricio Montoya]

I'm at a lost for words as to the meaning or massage this piece is trying to convey.
nevertheless nice work.

[Flo]

powerful simple piece, i truely loved it, the melody to it is sweet!
in my library it goes.
Flo

[Helen Crutchett]

A unique write. You did a good job with this!

[Allison]

I love this! it's like opposites. You phrased this so nicely. This poem is wonderful!