My....

Imaginary Piece

My precious blue pearl,

my sweetheart darling.

My only true girl

the only thing sparkling

My shining star,

my brightest light

The only one,

to see at night

My only thought,

into my head

My sweetest joy

trough good and bad

And this is what

you mean to me

Its simply short

For you to see

  

Reviews

[JENY]

A nice poem….
Very beautiful feelings….
True thoughts….
Loved it…

[sharon]

omg idk what to say other then WOW! does this girl see how much you care about her amazing and touching poem to a loved one. but it doesn't just touch the heart but the feeling in each and every bone in my body. I am truely amazed by what i have red... congrats on the wonderful write...=)

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow! I like how this piece comes together, definitely from the heart.
Excellent write.

[Allison]

This is so amazing. The girl you love is really lucky! :)

[G. Anderson]

Very sweet and short. Touching in the most simplified way, through the comparison of pearls....
Bravo.
~Gage

[Michael X]

a sweet and classic ode, yet sentimental enough to capture the hearts
attention, the attention to subtle detail really brinsg the meaning into view
this reminds me of romance thatis soft, simple and pure. a sense of
love and innocence. and wonder. overall you did a really great job!

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Beautiful. The simplicity makes this even more beautiful! I especially loved the line 'My precious blue pearl' great analogy! I enjoyed reading this.