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Depleted I stand, again and again 

no feeling inside, only the pain

Relentless I'm now, the future is past

Confusion they say, its here to last

In world of disorder, in chaos is space

There's nothing to order there's nothing to race

Mortification of your soul, leads you to dead end

further understanding, means nothing more than a suicide.

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Reviews

[EmpressPoetess]

This is one of your very best writes, deeply detailing the hard life and awareness of the worlds sad condition.

[JENY]

That is a nice piece of writing…
There is a mathematical touch in the expressions..
Beauty of brevity enhances depth….
Of reading….
Loved it….

[Mauricio Montoya]

very well writen, like how it comes together.
nice work.

[Allison]

This is so beautiful!!!!!! It explains soo much about how you feel.

[G. Anderson]

Explained very well in such a short amount of time. Gage enjoyed.
Send her some more read requests soon...
~Gage
P.S. and perhaps return the favor:]

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Good poem written in a great way. The words you put in were awesome, the whole poem gives a unique feel, reflects pain beautifully. Good job!