Creation

My new Insightful work :) than you all for reading and for nice reviews

I have to create
I have to take action
There's no time to wait
for life-coming attractions

To be a creator
to feel like a God
The soul educator
is on the right spot

To help all the others
who now have  a need
The pain always bothers
the lust and the greed

Through self understanding
evolving my soul
In heaven now standing
I pray for you all

Reviews

[EmpressPoetess]

very nice

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with you. We the people need to change the world. Only way the world will get better is when a billion people walk together in different places for the same dream of peace, no sickness and no hunger in our world. I pray we do it very soon. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Adelia Alighieri]

I agree with Selene. This is very creative in itself. Great job.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

engaging~ great rhythmic flow!~

[ShaneBerry]

i loved the first stanza!

[*** Hey Jude***]

this is a beautiful prayer that touched my heart. Thank you for sharing! ~ Jude :-)

[JENY]

Really insightful…
Thought provoking….
A different theme….

[G. Anderson]

I can relate to this poem.
Very neat.
~G.T.A.

[Mauricio Montoya]

I like the rhythm and rhyme in this piece.
Nice work great job.

[deeps]

This is simply amazing I like this alot.