Insanity is all around us

Insanity is all around us
loosing all the precious things
Only lust and craziness control us
killing for the diamond rings

Overpowered by the human nature
searching for false believes
Distant from the Gods creations
nobody is ready to forgive

Insanity is all around us
and fear grows inside our souls
Insanity is all around us
and in ocean of sadness flows

In search of wisdom
you might just loose it all
In the mental kingdom
is not insane to have the Holy Grail

Reviews

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... wow ... that's a powerful comment on the mentality that is driving contemporary existence ... it's really sad that this is so ... i wonder all the time about how much more we will degenerate as a society before beginning to reconstruct from scratch ... because that's pretty much what is needed ... in my humble opinion ... simple and profound verse ... rendered with earnestness ... a very enriching read ... (highest rating) ...

[P.S I Love You]

Wow.. This poem is great.. it's a very powerful poem! I liked it dearly.

[Allison]

This is good. Like gage said, the first 3 are my favorite stanzas. Good job on this!

[G. Anderson]

The first three stanzas were my favorite :^)
I love reading your work, send me more requests!
~Gage

[O!]

When i look at the world this is how i now see it....yeah...the big picture isnt that pretty....sometimes i wonder why we're still pro-creating! :-P

believes= beliefs

x,
O!