I wanna Tell Ya

Another One which came out of me Hope you find something for you in it :) Love you all :) thanks for reading :) my crap :)

I wanna tell you only this
there is nothing more important than a kiss

It is hard to live a life
without ocean of love in which you dive

Forget all bad obsessions
and start another loving session

Don't turn your back
on your own happiness
Get back on track
and live without stress

Always easier to cry
rather for the love to die

But to be precise
to feel loved is so nice

So don't forget that feeling
and even without love keep living

Cause life is a never ending story
Who are you and what is your category

Answer this one question
and make your own suggestion

Put it in your heart and mind
and you will live life of new kind

God Bless you all
I hope that you never fall

Reviews

[emmah]

this is a beautiful, sweet and pure verse that is inspirational. it touches the difficulty of life, the healing that love can bring and the inevitable need for love in the world! it's a wise verse, simple and unique, and exceptionally touching!

my favorite lines

'Don't turn your back
on your own happiness"

it's a brilliant life lesson and was a pleasure to read!

[Bee]

very realistic poem. very readable and honest. Great job. =">

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

beautiful inspirational~ =)~

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Great! All you need is love and you showed it beautifully. I can read this over and over again and never get bored. Great words you put in.

[EmpressPoetess]

This is very nice, good flow and a great message.

[truth]

I really liked this. Good messages but gently and poetically stated as if you are taking the ready in a steady direction to these great lines: Answer this one question and make your own suggestion

Put it in your heart and mind
and you will live life of new kind

[Mauricio Montoya]

I love the rhyme in this piece
Great job well done.

[*** Hey Jude***]

Well I agree to disagree with DR as I find this piece very insightful, and cathartic for you Artist. I enjoyed your sharing of emotions felt, and want to remind you know that we all fall, or get pushed down. It is our choice whether we get back up or stay down. Love these lines as our minds do control our actions, and with change of thought and mind; change in life comes in time.
"Put it in your heart and mind
and you will live life of new kind" Nice work ~ Jude

[G. Anderson]

I must say I strongly disagree on the concept of love the outlook you have. But only because of my past and what has been inflicted upon me.
Nonetheless, a great piece. It was very clear in what you believe in, and it created many images :)
Nice
~Gage

[Beatles9322]

AWESOME! This inspired me so much and I really really like it. Great flow.