Determination

In a daring stance
looking for an opposition
Having greatest chance
to win this competition

Push your every limit
till the end is near
You just have to dream it
till your win is clear

Having no emotions
makes your strongest link
Being out of options
will it make you think

Yet your only goal
is to win it all
Taking your control
even when you fall

 

Reviews

This is a lovely inspiring piece. Its great when you get to read something that isnt too emo. :)
Well done

[Marlena]

Uplifting. I like it :)

[Aldora Sparrow]

Simple and very straight-forward. My favorite stanza is
"Push your every limit
till the end is near
You just have to dream it
till your win is clear"
In the third stanza, the last line, I think you should put a question mark because it reads more like a question than a statement. Some of rhytm is off a little and some of the rhymes seem forced. Maybe you should go back and reword some of it for more clarity and have better rhytm.
Otherwise, nice work

[St.Jimmy]

I found this poem very short and simple but really enthusiastic and determined
a person should always be determined in his path towards his goal
good message
~Aaradhya

[Helen Crutchett]

I liked this a lot. I am not a competitive person and admire people who are. You are spot on in this. I can relate to contests here with this stanza...

"Having no emotions
makes your strongest link
Being out of options
will it make you think"

Good work Artist!

[P.S I Love You]

Interesting. =) This is a short but sweet poem. Your right to the point with it. Nice Work. :)

[Allison]

This is awesome!! There aren't very many words, but it says everything. Great job!

[Beatles9322]

Great!

[Adora.xo]

Great emotion, and depiction of determintation. Awesome jobv love! I liked it alot!

~Adora

[darkgurl]

I like this, You put alot of emotion into this write.
I loved yoru last stanza the best. This is very well written.