New Begining

How nice is a new start!

New beginning
new true meaning
new believing
new forgiving

Empty glass filled with gas
made out of lost hopes
New perception of life
have come to your attention

new start should be smart
brand new appearance
set the experience

stay true to your gut
don't stop after every "but"

Author's Note

this was new experience for me trying to change the style a bit. waiting for your reviews

Reviews

[nukamichianpaux]

I do enjoy the way this piece makes me think; makes me think about how it feels to feel this way. Very optimistic, a nice substitute for those of us who are natural pessimists. My favorite lines were "Empty glass filled with gas, made out of lost hopes" I'm thinking it either means you let go of your lost hopes, or perhaps they are just set back, since they are just gas? And if the glass is empty, then you are starting over, but the old hopes are still there? Interesting. Very nice.

[P.S I Love You]

Great Poem. Very fantastic. I love the way you use your words in this poem, and once again Great poem!