Another day

Another day

A Poem by Angel Veselinov
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One day ahead deep feelings revealed :)

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Another day just passed by me

I am feeling like I missed it

another day just being free

I am being so persistent


I love to do whatever i want

no matter is it wrong or right

It saddens something that you can't

you have to leave me by tonight


My choice is mine

and I am free

There was a time

for you and me


Seeing only me

standing by my side

Now i have to be

now i have to stride


Runing out of options

loosing your last hope

There're no proportions

for your favourite dope


You are so obbessed

only by confusion

Being so depressed

makes you an illussion




© 2009 Angel Veselinov


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You are really talented, the words flow together so well, it seems almost effortless. I actually didn't even realized it rhymed until I read it for a third time. I like the verse:
"My choice is mine
and I am free
There was a time
for you and me"
Great piece.




Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on November 4, 2009

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Angel Veselinov
Angel Veselinov

Plovdiv, Bulgaria



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Heal The World, Hope that you like my poetry. I like to write motivational and positive poetry to inspire people and help them trough hard times and when they lost their faith. I hope that you like.. more..

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