whatever

The previous poem achievement just had to has an opposite hope you like it.

Whatever you do

just comes back to you

whatever you try

you're saying goodbye

And fast you loose patience

because you're afraid

Afraid of those patients

by whom you've been paid

But why are you trying

again and again

Whatever you're dieing

you're dieing in pain

And than comes that freedom

you think you're flying

Whatever you think now

its last you're dieing

Reviews

[*~Kristy~*]

This was very pretty, a few spelling errors with (patience), but it took me forever to figure out how to spell it correctly myself, lol. Anyways, I really liked this. Your emotions are clearly conveyed. GREAT JOB