Past and Future

What is past

what is future

in this life fast,

the present we nurture

What is now

what is later

Is there ink

that stays on paper

If you know the present

you will know the future

Isn't it a present

When you give someone a sculpture

Living for the moment

understand the past

being such an omen

living vaguely fast

Is there a reason

is there a plan

or you are in a prison

from which you haven't ran.

Reviews

[The Wave]

this left me a bit confused.
wording wasnt the best. it may have been purposefully done, but even so, i dont think it really worked.


overall, it does seem like you have great potential though.
good job