My Soul

I just surprised myself with this one. It is for all the reviewers who stimulated me to write this in this late hour for me :) thanks to all.

My soul feel now like in a cage

Its loosing control

I guess it is now on life stage

and catching its flow

The life is so simple

the life is scencire

It is like a dimple

You can shed no tear

But all this emotions

confuse our brain

no easy devotion

no escape from the pain

But then comes the calmness

you feel like you fly

you're free from the darkness

you think you can die

And nothing can stop you

freeing from pain

Your life is now over

You did go in vain

Reviews

[MNeilsen]

What an awesome poem. A look at a life slipping away until it is gone with one final thought.