Last Hope

Just... yah.

The sky grows dark,

My heart grows hard,

I see your face

And I know.

You are 

My only hope,

My final chance,

My last hope.

My luck is gone,

My heart destroyed,

Your dark eyes are

The only thing holding me.

I talk to you,

You shoot me down,

There it goes,

My last hope.

Author's Note

Just.... don't ask...

Reviews

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

I felt in my minds eye the sound of a camera taking a picture,the loud click was heard with the same finality as your last line "My Last Hope." Preserved now and until..

[loowzerX]

I read this, and loved it. well done

[Coyote Poetry]

Those moment where life must be decided. Can knock us down and ain't so easy to heal. A powerful short poem. Some question must be asked. We hope for the right answers. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[HereWithoutYou<3]

It's awesome, without that many words to explain what it ment, you can just know what's happening and understand it. You did very good.

[melissa]

very good:)