Apology

Sadness fills me,

Anger fills you.

I know I messed up,

I know im dumb,

I know that you deserve better

Than the freak that is me.

Please accept my apology.

I try to behave

But things don’t always go

The way that I plan.

More than likely it all goes wrong

And I ruin the best thing I’ve ever had.

Author's Note

please....

Reviews

[J.Black]

There's a time in life you realize that you're actually not the mistake. It's just the time and place that was wrong. Many people can relate to this story though because it's of heart break. Something everyone's faced. Sometimes you think it's the "best" thing that was happening for the time- but if it was it would have worked the way you and things were. Nothing needs to change. Not you. Not the other. Hey, look on the bright side- atleast it gave me this poem to read!

[Drifter]

I think at times in our life, many of us can relate to these words or have spoken variations of them. We try to offer advice to one another to help move beyond it and time doesn't always heal wounds.That being said, poetry (and stories) can help where time refuses to. The ones we write for ourselves. The ones we write for others. The ones we write for no one at all. Maybe, once we write every word that we possibly can, we find that the damage that was done has started to fade. Well, that's my little rant for the evening. It's nice to read something that sends you off on a tangent.

[Samuel Dickens]

When forgivness is sincerely sought, I think it should be given. Hopefully, that was your result. If not, then you shouldn't worry about it.

[Emily]

The best thing is to say this to the person you hurt. It sucks, and it is hard to admit when we're wrong. But admitting it is the first step to healing the wound.
This is a powerful short piece which holds a ton of emotion. NIce work! Hope things work out

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Real love will accept the good and bad in us. I like the feel and the story in the poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote