Needs A Title

Needs A Title

A Poem by Luna

Dark brown eyes stare back at me,

Eyes filled with a sea of emotions,

Love meant just for me.

I never thought it was meant to be,

That a boy like you would consider me.

Your eyes are the key to your soul,

The smile on your face showing your happiness,

The embrace making me safe.

I know now that my thoughts were wrong,

That just because someone told me something

Doesn’t mean it’s true.

Everything about you is beautiful.

My boy, you are perfect,

Through and through

To the depths of your soul.

© 2010 Luna


Author's Note

Luna
I would love it if someone could please help me come up with a title. I always have trouble coming up with them. Thank you and I hope you enjoyed!

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ooeeh cute poem..love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this line
"your eyes are the key to your soul"
Eyes a medium for our soul, the gate to our inner thoughts and true essence.

@just a thought you should name your poem after that line

Posted 14 Years Ago


another deep piece ..liked the detail in this alot... overall a very superb job on this as for title... sea of emotions is kind of catchy...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Luna
Luna

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I am a helpless romantic who also loves to attempt to write romance adventure (my novel Maiden Voyage for example) but I tend to try to stick more to poetry. I am southern (yes, I do have an accent) a.. more..

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