Be Mine

Why waste another valentines day alone,
Why watch everyone else be happy?
I watch you all alone as well,
Your smile hiding your sadness.
I know you long for a valentine
Just as much as I.
So maybe you could possibly
Consider being mine.

Reviews

[Gandré]

this was beautifully innocent.

[VioletRose]

that was a very cute poem! Very well done

[Rose]

Aww :)) cute!! I like it. I like the rhyme to it!!

[E. A. Fielder]

it can be dangerous if two lonely people get together. Sometimes it works out and sometimes it makes things worse. great write but I wonder what happens.

[snapstache]

That was very cute!
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[Sagittarius]

Pretty (:

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Life is too short to be lonely.. and I believe there is someone for everyone. Outrageous standards are sometimes what stands in the way of finding happiness.. a fantasy image of whom are dream partners may be. Your writing shows two hearts that are alone.. offering a valentine to another that may be lonely.. which is sometimes hard to know.. but the spirit of Valentine's comes alive in this.. there are many types of relationships of all levels out there.. at some point we do have to compromise to make love work.. give and take.. here you show you are a true giver.. beautiful work in it's simplicity.

[kewlbluetiger]

Love it! Who would ever want to be alone on Valentines Day! Thought you did a great job of invoking the feelings of attraction for the sake of avoiding loneliness. Hey! One of my longer term relationships in college came out of a situation just like this ;) !!!

Thanks for the read. Well done!
Happy Valentines Day!

[melissa]

wow I feel the same way nicely done!:)