Abortion

It speaks for itself.

You read about how bad abortion is,
How it is murder,
How everyone who believes it is fine
Is going to rot in hell.
Well,
I guess I'm rotting in hell.
I find nothing wrong with it,
Don't believe that you are killing a child.
It is only a bundle of cells,
A fetus.
If you can't take care of the child,
Why let it live a crappy life,
Why create another serial killer?
If you were raped,
Why would you want to have a constant reminder
Every time you looked into your child's face?
It's is the mother's choice,
That will never change.

Author's Note

This is how I feel but I want your honest opinion.

Reviews

[G. Marie"floating on an..]

au contrair these bundles of cells are the same bundle of cells you have in your body at this moment and at 10 days of life there is a tiny little heartbeat. I disagree with you but you have the right and courage to have your own opinion but to those who dont want children there is birth control available to all which is a better solution than yours. we will all have to answer to the creator of life someday to our actions or non actions. just something to think about!

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conviction counts

[Alz Alz]

Abortion is such a big controversial topic... It's hard for me to take a side! It's good you feel so strongly bout something like this. Take a stand luna. 100/100.

[*Evelen*]

I agree with tenderheart on this one.

It was a good read and nicely put. Well done=)

[AbsentElements]

I completely agree. Women shouldn't have to go through so much pain just to have a child that will live probably a terrible life.

There was one mother who didn't want to have her child, but her parents wouldn't get her an abortion. She killed her child. Not only was it a terrible idea not to let her get the abortion she wanted, it was a terrible idea not to let her give it up for adoption, another option she considered. Imagine how her parents felt knowing they let it happen.

So when people say you will rot in hell for killing a child remember...
It's not a child until 12 weeks, after which you can't get an abortion anyway.
And after it does become a child, which the mother was guilted into having, imagane what kind of life it will live.

[alicia b.]

i like this. mainly because of how i feel but whatever. good job.

[Stephen Scaggs]

Dear Ms. Luna,

Though you are pro-life this doesn't do any credit to your stance. It is the mothers choice but aborting potential life or life itself is never the wise decision. Life is too precious to abort and I will never give a damn what scientists dub as a fetus. It is still moving, growing independently to the choice of the mother. You don't create a serial killer from a bad raising, a child is not a robot you can program to do things. It is still his choice though the parent can have influence on those choices. It may be the mother's choice, but it is still inhuman to abort potential life: fetus or life. It doesn't matter. A fetus grows into life. And if you are raped, I'm sorry: but you're taking out your pain and sorrow toward the child. In the womb is where life starts, to stop the miracle of life is murder.

Anyways, diving into the real issue: the poem. Never write out of aggravation because emotionally filled poems do not do sway people. Always write with a collaboration of heart and soul. Stanzas help, rhyming help. The flow is somewhat off. I've read a lot of better poems from you. I know you can do better. Your mind is the stencil and your heart is the ink. To form art you must use both... if that makes sense. We are still friends so don't worry. Not aiming my attack at you. But you could have wrote this a bit better. 5.3/10.

Sincerely,
S. W. Scaggs

[L'Amour De Musique]

Not trying to explode or anything, this is my opinion. If you don't want to see the child's face, put it up for adoption.

[melissa]

im pro life but i think its up to that person. i mean i wouldnt do it but if a girl was rape like you said she should have that choice