Abortion

It speaks for itself.

You read about how bad abortion is,
How it is murder,
How everyone who believes it is fine
Is going to rot in hell.
Well,
I guess I'm rotting in hell.
I find nothing wrong with it,
Don't believe that you are killing a child.
It is only a bundle of cells,
A fetus.
If you can't take care of the child,
Why let it live a crappy life,
Why create another serial killer?
If you were raped,
Why would you want to have a constant reminder
Every time you looked into your child's face?
It's is the mother's choice,
That will never change.

Author's Note

This is how I feel but I want your honest opinion.

Reviews

[G. Marie"floating on an..]

au contrair these bundles of cells are the same bundle of cells you have in your body at this moment and at 10 days of life there is a tiny little heartbeat. I disagree with you but you have the right and courage to have your own opinion but to those who dont want children there is birth control available to all which is a better solution than yours. we will all have to answer to the creator of life someday to our actions or non actions. just something to think about!

[Hopelessly Confused]

This is exactly how I feel on the matter but I dont think I could have ever put it in the amazing heart touching way that you have in this poem.

[Theresa]

Everyone is entitled to their opinion and I think it is great that you are able to express your feelings without fear that you will be chewed out for it. It is such a strong and dividing topic. I have to agree with you on this one though. Roe Vs Wade gave woman the right to choose. It's no one else's choice to make. I don't think it should be used as a mean of birth control in any way but sometimes things happen like you said rape. I think this poem is great and good for you for voicing your opinion. That is a hard thing to do so I applaud you for that.

[PoisonedFlower]

Great poem! You did an awesome job of expressing your opinion. Personally, if I got pregnant and didn't want to be, I would still keep the baby, even if it was from a rape. I could never bring myself to hurt even a "bundle of cells," as you put it. And I would love the baby just the same as any mother would her child. But that's just me! I don't agree or disagree with abortion. I guess it's just everyone's personal choice and everybody has their own reasons and experiences and decisions. And you did a beautiful job of expressing YOUR opinion here! I'm not trying to offend it in any way at all!

[Zoren]

This is a great one. You have shown the other point of view regarding abortion well.

[Susan14]

Abortion is very disstrubing and wrong but sometimes it's the only choice the person has. this is a great write and it has much feeling in it, keep up the great work

[Raven Radke]

Abortion is very disturbing to me!
It makes me think of another child not getting a chance
on this Earth!
But I really enjoyed this art!
Very lovely and touchy on the emotions!
Very Very excellent!

[there is no more from m..]

To me i'm on the sidline of abortion but i liked reading this well done :)

[Rose]

You already know how I feel about it, but I have to agree with Darienee, it does seem more like a speech. but once again, good work. If we do not express our feelings in our work, they are just empty words

Yours truly, Rose

[Darienne]

While I don't agree with your opinion, this is pretty good.
It does seem more like a speech than a poem though, maybe a little work on your flow?

[Happy Cereal]

A very striking poem, full of blunt honesty. I like your choice of words, and I think this is very brave.