Used

Used

A Chapter by Luna
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This is what I feel...

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They grab up the goods,

My precious school work that took hours,

Copy it,

Abuse it,

Wrinkle it,

Toss it away.

I search through the garbage to retrieve it,

Angry that they could treat me so,

That I could be so used,

Yet I stay silent,

Afraid to draw attention,

To make a show,

To be yelled at.

Later,

I speak a single syllable

And I get screamed at.

They completely refuse my existence,

As if I’m the one raindrop

Falling from a snowy sky.

I’m the odd one out,

The one that gets used

Then tossed away,

Just like my work.



© 2010 Luna


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I can feel that you put a lot of emotion into writing this. A really good poem this is!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awe, the last two lines really get to me. This is really sad :( 100/100...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I feel the SAME way. I hate it but when I came over to Cyber school I felt that i was a normal person who needs to be Unique to even live life

Posted 14 Years Ago


That's just wrong of them to be like that.
People can be so cruel. Time for change for
every action needs a reaction. Well, that's
what I tell myself, but I end up being quiet too.
Usually...An emotional write full of sadness & loneliness.


Posted 14 Years Ago


A powerful poem. Disappointment, sadness and anger of being left alone in your words. Some people don't deserve your time or effort to be a friend. Complete poem was very good. You made your point.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Luna
Luna

Civil War Capital, VA



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