Your Opinion

You say
I'm stupid,
I'm ugly,
I'm fat,
I probably don't understand a word you say,
I'm a jerk,
I'm an idiot,
I will never get a guy.

Your cruel thoughts don't penetrate my mind.
I'm so used to them
That they don't bother me.
Do you only say these things because you are insecure?

He says
You look fine,
You're smart,
The reason they are mean is because you make them feel stupid,
You're nice.

I just can't believe what you say.
In  my mind I've fallen for what the others tell me,
What the cruel people told me.
After a while,
It just gets to you.
I want to believe you
But I just can't.
I'm sorry.

Reviews

[Alz Alz]

Never fall into peer pressure. The only reason someone makes fun of someone else is because they're jealous :) Great poem, love the layout. I say that because this poem does not look overwhelming. I hate seeing long, long poems, it overwhelms me and I run away! Lol. I love this poem :) great job! 100/100

[JustWantLove]

Waterfall of emotions; spill them and empty the barrels of murky residue only to fill them back up with goodness and pure joy!