Avoiding It All

Avoiding It All

A Chapter by Luna

Avoiding it all,
The pain,
The humiliation,
The stupidity I feel when it all comes out.
If I tell one thing,
You make me feel useless,
Stupid,
Insecure,
Unneeded.
You try to tell me what to do,
Tell me to tell people how I feel.
I can't do it.
Once again,
You call me stupid,
Insecure,
And then tell them for me,
Saying you are doing me a favor.
I tell you not to,
Beg you not to,
Plead with you.
You do nothing,
Refuse to listen.
I get to the point
Where I don't tell you anything.
I don't tell you anything,
I want to avoid it all.


© 2010 Luna


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This is amazing and very well written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wonder full...and powerful poem...WONDERFUL Write

Posted 14 Years Ago


First lesson with my wife. Be quiet and listen. A powerful poem. I don't waste time with people who do not listen. You wrote a powerful poem with some wisdom. Ending told it all. We can close doors to friends and lovers by being one-sided in conversation. A excellent first chapter.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awe, i feel bad for the character. You did a good job conveying this mood... Agreed with Zaza that some people just dont know that "NO" means "NO!!!" 100/100!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow. This is amazing. Sometimes people don't really get the word "No" and this poems shows that. The poem flows really good. Nice job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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