Pain

Stabbing pain permeates my jaw,
The strings moving within,
The blood pouring from the open wound.
Part of the jaw is missing,
My pain unreal
Though they tell me to suck it up,
Be a woman.
I wasn't supposed to have this done yet,
They weren't supposed to have come in,
Bruises form on each cheek,
Giving away what happened.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your description of the pain is amazing. I love when they tell you. Suck it up. Just give me some pain killers please. Story left a opening for more.
Coyote

[Alz Alz]

Wow, this really makes me think... It makes me wonder what this poem is about... I think it could have multiple meanings... very good, 100/100