Disappear

Disappear

A Chapter by Luna

They yell,
They scream,
They bite.
Sometimes I wish
I could disappear.
They don't see
That it hurts me.
Their yelling scares me,
Their screaming pains me,
Their biting hurts me.
I never do anything in response.
I sit alone,
Afraid to say a word,
Doing what they tell me to.


© 2010 Luna


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A poem that leave more questions then answers. I could feel in the words. The fear and desire to escape. A powerful flow of words.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


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That does sound very scary... Very well written, the mood definitely is frightening.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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JC
youve got me curious about what this is about.

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Luna
Luna

Civil War Capital, VA



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