If I Died Tomorrow

If I died tomorrow
Would anyone care?
Would anyone cry?
Would anyone come to my funeral,
Look at me,
And think of the good times we had together?
Would they wish
It had been them instead of me?
If I died tomorrow
Would anyone care?

Reviews

[Alz Alz]

This is a popular topic sometimes... It's kind of scary... Sometimes I think about that too.

[cheeeeese]

Sometimes I think about that, and I think everyone can relate to this because I feel many people ask themselves this. I'm glad you wrote about this, it was wonderfully written. Well done

[Nish Nish the Fish]

i ask myself the same things frequently, its a curious thing...thanks for makin me think tonight!

[Bexfinch]

wow sometimes i like to ask myself if i died how would life go on. But i realized by the painful death of my teacher that things would go back the same way they allways were but there might be a feeling of sorrow when thnking of that person.This is an excellent poem it talks about many of the things children teens preeteens and adults think about so it really catches you attention and makes you wonder. Would anyone really care if I died tommorow? Soo Bravo Bravo awsome poem

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem with a very good question. Life seem cold and lonely sometime. I like the feel and your question in your poem. We must celebrate being alive and leave marks of love and good deeds. Maybe we will be remembered. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[JustWantLove]

In gladness, hope can say 'What if..';
In sadness, life can see but grief;
If gone, forever loved and missed should be;
If lost, would someone long?
In certain passion life of all will seem to flee.

[melissa]

yes i would care:)

[A Touch of Insanity:)]

I'm sure someone would care, people always have an impact on other's lives :) Nice write, I can relate perfectly. You did a very good job of capturing the thought perfectly....

[Theresa]

I've asked these questions myself in the past. It's kind of weird to take yourself out of the picture and try to imagine how people would react. A poem so many can relate to. Great piece.

[A]

I'm sure lots of people would care. Losing someone is NEVER easy. I really liked this poem. I bet a lot of people think like this. You brought up some great questions. Great piece :)