Singing the Song of a Broken Heart

Singing the songs of a broken heart,
My eyes cry blue tears.
Your eyes meet mine,
Telling me that it won't work.
My heart sings louder,
The sadness growing as the moans do.
You try to comfort me
But my mind tells me to run,
That running will make my broken heart quiet.
I lay in the field,
The field were we first kissed.
The songs quiet as I drift into sleep.
The stopping of my heart
Ends the singing.

Reviews

[MistressEbzo]

Brilliant poem, I love the ending. Really hard-hitting and emotional.

[Bexfinch]

makes me wanna cry and spell my namein tears wel written

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful and sad. I go to places where I had great times now. The bad memories are more sweeter with time. Description and detail took me to a lonely field with you. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[deeps]

Such an emotional write, so well expressed!