Innocent Girl

This one just kinda came to me. Thank classical music,

Innocent girl
With stars as eyes
Tries to dive.
She misses the mark
And the innocent girls
Hopes go up in flames.
As time flies by
She tries and she tries,
She wonders why
And begins to cry.
Over the years,
Her innocence dies
And her hopes return.
The stars in her eyes
Burn brighter for sure.
She dives again
And meets her mark,
Making her eyes glow
With a happier spark.

Author's Note

This one is a bit odd. Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Moyo]

Wow, this one's really nice. For some reason it made me feel sad. I guess I felt sorry for the girl. I like how you used the diving analogy. The flow is nice in this one, it sounds professional.