Fireside Love

HA! I finally did it! I wrote a rhyming poem though it is kind of a sappy love poem but oh well. I concurred my goal!

You make me laugh,
You make me smile,
Sit down and stay awhile.

The fire is warm
And it's burning bright.
Your should stick around tonight.

The love I feel 
Is all for you,
I hope you feel the love too.

So stick around,
The time is right,
Keep me warm and in your sight.

Hold me close,
Keep me near,
I need you by my side, my dear.

Author's Note

I know it is corny and please don't be too hard on it. And I always have issues with titles so if anyone has any suggestions I would be happy to hear them! Thanks!

Reviews

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I liked it..you do not always have to ryme, but it is ok.. to.
I sometimes prefer not to as it limits my thoughts.. still well done.

[deeps]

Wow! You are very talented!
I like your writes alot.
You can keep amazing flow.

[Margaret]

Luna... It is very well written and your thoughts and feelings come through clearly. I liked it. Thanks for sharing.

[Iota]

YAY you reached your goal and you did a good job with it. Love poems are sappy but they are so much fun too aren't they? Nice write