Circle of Hatred

When I ignore you,
You get mad.
But what about
When you ignore me?
If I get mad,
You insult me,
Call me a wimp
Or say I'm in a bad mood.
If I say
I don't want to do something,
You get mad
And ignore me again.
Why should we be friends
When we move
In a circle of hatred?

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

Friendship is complicated sometimes, yes? I like the metaphor of the 'circle of hatred'.... When someone keeps hurting us again and again, it seems so much better to move on... Good luck with this particular friend that you write of...
Very inspirational work, my friend.

[Iota]

So many never see the circle they are on, and many of the ones who see this circle fail to end the ride. You explore feelings from the inside out it gives your writings power and meaning. Great job!

[Moyo]

Wow, are you getting a sudden urge of inspiration or what? I really like how this poem signifies something complicated in such a simple way. Your poetry skills are top notch.