Snow Clouds

IT"S SNOWING! Helped me come up with this!

The snow falls from the clouds

And shrouds my memories.

Hiding your face from view

When it was all I saw.

When the snow fell,

Melting the memories away,

The pain died

And all I saw was the cleanness

Of the pure white snow.

Author's Note

i know its odd. i just had the words pop into my head so its pretty rough.

Reviews

[Diego]

Short and sweet. I love it when you get your point across with very few words. It doesn't seem rough to me but if you edit it and think it's better let me know!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I don't think it's odd, it's very beautiful. A very creative write.

[TamiViolet]

No, it's not odd....it's POETRY!!! Spectacular creativity, my friend. Analogy is brilliant. I'm so glad we met :-) Thank you for sharing this lovely piece and the purity that accompanies....